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Wednesday, 13 September 2017
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The ancient Owl
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Today me and my friend Candice write something and we made it by falling the DASH? I hope you like it and peace comment.
As mr owl was pitching in a mysterious tree with stars shining brightly hanging over the tree tittly.
Today me and my friend Candice write something and we made it by falling the DASH? I hope you like it and peace comment.
This week we have been learning about DASH? paragraphs for adventure stories.
D = describe the settingA = use actionS = use speechH = describe how the character is feeling? = use a cliffhanger or rhetorical questionWe wrote collaboratively today.As mr owl was pitching in a mysterious tree with stars shining brightly hanging over the tree tittly.
Then mr owl heard a horrible sound whirling and whooshing state in front of him.
What was that? “He whispered to himself.Mr owl was standing there with his heart beating fastly. His face was followed of fear.
Mr owl thought am I going to die?
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